 We are entering the 500 word story competition.
This blog post is a place to discuss our ideas for our stories. We can comment on each others ideas too, so we can be helpful to each other.
33 Comments
Alistair
31/1/2013 11:44:25 pm
I think mythical creatures are great to put in stories.
Mr Tomkins
1/2/2013 01:23:58 am
Good idea Alistair, what type of mythical creatures are you thinking for your story?
Alastair
1/2/2013 02:48:58 am
Unicorns I think I might choose
hollie
1/2/2013 03:54:04 am
Alistair what type of human would you put in there
hollie
1/2/2013 02:12:21 am
One summer heat day a rather wet and slimy frog was leaping from leap pad to leap pad ,when he heard thundering feet.”Hey want to have a picnic with us “a heard of animals suddenly gasped ,“there's chocolate””no i hate chocolate its my enemy grumbled the miserable frog.”The determined horse pronounced mmm...my faverite.The frog explained “do you want a race””SURE” the cat said excitedly.They lined up ready to go...BLAST OF they were gone 1st was chilly charlie 2cond was cold chloe then came freddy frog.Obsticles came by they went left to right up and down.finally in the end 1st was feddy frog then came chilly charlie then was cold chloe WOW! Shouted freddie i leaped over you all and won.”so...” said chloe the crocadile.”so what” whispered the frog?”so are you going to have some chocolate””ohh all right then!they ALL had a nice lovely picnic
Mr Tomkins
4/2/2013 03:43:10 am
Good start Hollie. Can you be more descriptive about the problem? Don't forget paragraphs either.
Bethan
1/2/2013 02:26:59 am
my story idea is:
Mr Tomkins
4/2/2013 03:43:41 am
Good idea Bethan. What is the problem going to be in the story?
Bethan
4/2/2013 04:32:24 am
the problem is she needs to get ride of the magic or she will smashing things for the rest of her life.
Jamie
1/2/2013 03:34:20 am
I think my story is going to be about aliens invading earth.
Mr Tomkins
4/2/2013 03:44:14 am
Sounds great...where are they from? What is the outcome going to be?
hollie
1/2/2013 03:51:52 am
I think you should think of some thing good and something bad then think of an ordanairy thing then a silly thing and make your mind up on what character should be what!!!
Bethan
7/2/2013 04:36:03 am
yes Hollie you read my mind plus the good story's are the original
Nieve
1/2/2013 04:44:43 pm
I think fantasy stories are great
Mr Tomkins
4/2/2013 03:45:21 am
What kind of thing might happen in your story then Nieve?
Isaac
1/2/2013 05:35:12 pm
I think robots vs monsters should be good
Mr Tomkins
4/2/2013 03:46:04 am
Well done Isaac: Robots Vs Monsters. Where do they live? Why are they against each other?
Poppy
2/2/2013 01:55:13 am
I think going on a adventure to a far away land, and discovering new animals and plants.
Mr Tomkins
4/2/2013 03:47:05 am
Sounds like an ace idea Poppy.
C Tomkins
4/2/2013 04:33:47 am
What type of things is she smashing?
leah
9/2/2013 05:48:46 pm
my idea was that a boy calld bob whent to the zoo and he whent to the monkes and because he spent lods of time with the monkeys he started turning into one.
C Tomkins
9/2/2013 08:54:28 pm
I love your idea Leah!
William
12/2/2013 07:34:49 pm
I am going to write a scary story about a ghost who is lost and needs my help to get home.
Philip
12/2/2013 07:36:17 pm
I would like to write a story about a funny frog who sticks his tongue out at children.
leah
12/2/2013 10:00:28 pm
yes and his mum gets really worried.
leah
12/2/2013 10:01:36 pm
the exiting thing is that he can talk to outher monkeys
C Tomkins
13/2/2013 04:06:49 am
Well done Sophie! I don't think we can put pictures with our entries unfortunately.
C Tomkins
13/2/2013 04:08:04 am
Good idea Philip. What's going to happen that makes it exciting for others to read?
C Tomkins
13/2/2013 04:08:50 am
I like your idea William. Is it a friendly ghost?
William
13/2/2013 05:45:17 pm
My ghost is sad and in trouble. I got the idea from a book called Undead Ed. I have written it and the ending is mysterious. I will type it up today and enter the competition. The ghost lives in Woodchester Mansion. We walk our wags there.
Bethany
14/2/2013 12:40:00 am
I think putting in things unixpectedly to make it more exiting to read.
leah
14/2/2013 09:10:46 pm
really thing you are right Bethany
leah
14/2/2013 08:56:49 pm
the exiting ting is that Bob can tallk to other monkeys Your comment will be posted after it is approved.
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