We are entering the 500 word story competition.

This blog post is a place to discuss our ideas for our stories.

We can comment on each others ideas too, so we can be helpful to each other.
 


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Alistair
01/02/2013 3:44pm

I think mythical creatures are great to put in stories.

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Mr Tomkins
01/02/2013 5:23pm

Good idea Alistair, what type of mythical creatures are you thinking for your story?

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Alastair
01/02/2013 6:48pm

Unicorns I think I might choose

hollie
01/02/2013 7:54pm

Alistair what type of human would you put in there

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hollie
01/02/2013 6:12pm

One summer heat day a rather wet and slimy frog was leaping from leap pad to leap pad ,when he heard thundering feet.”Hey want to have a picnic with us “a heard of animals suddenly gasped ,“there's chocolate””no i hate chocolate its my enemy grumbled the miserable frog.”The determined horse pronounced mmm...my faverite.The frog explained “do you want a race””SURE” the cat said excitedly.They lined up ready to go...BLAST OF they were gone 1st was chilly charlie 2cond was cold chloe then came freddy frog.Obsticles came by they went left to right up and down.finally in the end 1st was feddy frog then came chilly charlie then was cold chloe WOW! Shouted freddie i leaped over you all and won.”so...” said chloe the crocadile.”so what” whispered the frog?”so are you going to have some chocolate””ohh all right then!they ALL had a nice lovely picnic

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Mr Tomkins
04/02/2013 7:43pm

Good start Hollie. Can you be more descriptive about the problem? Don't forget paragraphs either.

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Bethan
01/02/2013 6:26pm

my story idea is:
Molly is working dawn the road and she bumps in to
A very rear gold bird. After she bumped in to that bird she never
felt the same.There was a reason for that it was because she had
magic.

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Mr Tomkins
04/02/2013 7:43pm

Good idea Bethan. What is the problem going to be in the story?

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Bethan
04/02/2013 8:32pm

the problem is she needs to get ride of the magic or she will smashing things for the rest of her life.

Jamie
01/02/2013 7:34pm

I think my story is going to be about aliens invading earth.

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Mr Tomkins
04/02/2013 7:44pm

Sounds great...where are they from? What is the outcome going to be?

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hollie
01/02/2013 7:51pm

I think you should think of some thing good and something bad then think of an ordanairy thing then a silly thing and make your mind up on what character should be what!!!

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Bethan
07/02/2013 8:36pm

yes Hollie you read my mind plus the good story's are the original
story's

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Nieve
02/02/2013 8:44am

I think fantasy stories are great

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Mr Tomkins
04/02/2013 7:45pm

What kind of thing might happen in your story then Nieve?

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Isaac
02/02/2013 9:35am

I think robots vs monsters should be good

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Mr Tomkins
04/02/2013 7:46pm

Well done Isaac: Robots Vs Monsters. Where do they live? Why are they against each other?

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Poppy
02/02/2013 5:55pm

I think going on a adventure to a far away land, and discovering new animals and plants.

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Mr Tomkins
04/02/2013 7:47pm

Sounds like an ace idea Poppy.

What will the problem be when the characters are on this adventure?

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C Tomkins
04/02/2013 8:33pm

What type of things is she smashing?

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leah
10/02/2013 9:48am

my idea was that a boy calld bob whent to the zoo and he whent to the monkes and because he spent lods of time with the monkeys he started turning into one.

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C Tomkins
10/02/2013 12:54pm

I love your idea Leah!

What exciting things happen when Bob is a monkey then?

Does he get upset being a monkey after a while and want to turn human?

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William
13/02/2013 11:34am

I am going to write a scary story about a ghost who is lost and needs my help to get home.

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Philip
13/02/2013 11:36am

I would like to write a story about a funny frog who sticks his tongue out at children.

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leah
13/02/2013 2:00pm

yes and his mum gets really worried.

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leah
13/02/2013 2:01pm

the exiting thing is that he can talk to outher monkeys

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C Tomkins
13/02/2013 8:06pm

Well done Sophie! I don't think we can put pictures with our entries unfortunately.

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C Tomkins
13/02/2013 8:08pm

Good idea Philip. What's going to happen that makes it exciting for others to read?

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C Tomkins
13/02/2013 8:08pm

I like your idea William. Is it a friendly ghost?

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William
14/02/2013 9:45am

My ghost is sad and in trouble. I got the idea from a book called Undead Ed. I have written it and the ending is mysterious. I will type it up today and enter the competition. The ghost lives in Woodchester Mansion. We walk our wags there.

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Bethany
14/02/2013 4:40pm

I think putting in things unixpectedly to make it more exiting to read.

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leah
15/02/2013 1:10pm

really thing you are right Bethany

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leah
15/02/2013 12:56pm

the exiting ting is that Bob can tallk to other monkeys

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